L. John Nuttall said he and others made the Lecture at the Veil, which Brigham corrected.
L. John Nuttall, Journal, February 12, 1877, in Diary of L. John Nuttall, (1834-1905) Dec. 1876-Mar. 1884 (Provo, UT: Brigham Young University, 1948), 22
I wrote on a Mode of Procedure to be observed in the giving of endowments also assisted by Bro J. D. T. McAllister & a H Raleigh – by invitation we all eat supper at the house of Bro Crane – and spent the evening with President Young reading what we had written. he accepted & corrected the same.